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Story Reveiew “WISEMAN”

I think my story went well, i enjoyed writting it, its a bit grosome but thats me and this story is really funny in some parts. I hope the teacher like sit even no its not my good copy.

Amsterdam Sea Port

The old crooked man stood on the docks of a redeveloping Port Amsterdam. The old man couldn’t see his reflection in the water because of how extremely dirty the water was and the ripples making the water look more dirty than what it is normally. And to think they can change this place and make the water cleaner and deeper.

He stands there in the pouring rain and lighting and thunder in the distance, it finishes a perfect scene for a terrific painting. He wears his rain coat and rain hat with water splashing off them and onto the already drenched pier. You can see his perky nipples through his rain coat, his nose is blue like it caught some frostbite and his eyes nearly iced shut.

 The old crooked man stood by the Pier waiting for his boat to come back from its sea voyage which he couldn’t go on due to an illness that wont let him sail again. He see’s his boat in the distance and right at that moment he grabs his chest and falls into the extremely un clean murky water, his body just there floatingon the top of the water with rain drops splashing around the poor old crooked deadman.

Synopsis: The WiseMan

Potman is a vengeful kid and he wants revenge against everyone that made his life hard when he started his teenage years and he starts by killing his father. Potman has a long path of people he needs to get revenge on and he goes through them one by one brutally killing them until he gets to the people he wants the most revenge on “THE FOUR BLACK GUYS” the reason his so scared of these black guys is because when he was thirteen he had sex with this black chick Molina that at the time was going out with one of those black guys named Jamal but Molina didn’t say that to Potman so when the Jamal found out he got his black mates to bash up Potman with him, they broke both of Potmans legs and smashed in his face with a baseball bat. So when Potman gets to the last four people he really wants revenge he is scared but he knows whats to do. Potman approaches the black guys with a large Machete, the black guys stand there and laugh at Potman, Jamal runs off but Potman doesn’t take any notice of it, the black guys pull out brass knuckles and runs at Potman……………………………………….

Sorry but u will just have to read my story to find the ending out:P  

Synopsis: The WiseMan

Potman is a vengful kid and he wants revenge against everyone that made his life hard when he started his teenage years and he starts by killing his father. Potman has a long path of people he needs to get revenge on and he goes through them one by one brutally kiling them untill he gets to the people he wants the most revenge on “THE FOUR BLACK GUYS” the reason his so scared of these black guys is because when he was thirteen he had sex with this black chick Molina that at the time was going out with one of those black guys named Jamal but Molina didnt say that to Potman so when the Jamal found out he got his black mates to bash up Potman with him, they broke both of Potmans legs and smashed in his face with a baseball bat. So when Potman gets to the last four people he really wants revenge he is scared but he knows wats to do. Potman approaches the black guys with a large Mechette, the black guys stand there and laugh at Potman, Jamal runs off but Potman doesnt take any notice of it, the black guys pull out brass knuckles and runs at potman……………………………………….

Sorry but u will just have to read my story to find the ending out:P  

Novel

Title: The Wiseman

Main Character: Potman Genre

Short Description: He is a smartass. He does whatever he wants when he wants. He is 14 years old and he enjoys sports and he is very fit.

Spelling Test

Facist      Fascist            I got that stupid word wrong so i got 9 out of 10

City Experience Day 3 Summary

Well to know surprise i woke up and had breakfast and then caught the bus down to the Croydon Station And done the same thing ive done for the last 2 days waited for my mates then went to IGA to gte a drink we got back and then got our names ticked off and then got on the train to Flinders Station.

In our big groups we went to The Old Melbourne Gaol and had a tour of that, our tour guide taled about Ned Kelly and how he was hung and all that and he showed us where they hung the people and the Torture Triangle were u would get whipped by the cat o nine tales. After that we got some time to explore for ourselves. Then we went off in our small groups.

Our group went to Parliment House and Saint Pauls Cathedral and got out work done again it was boring as anything so we just mucked around for sometime then wnet back to Flinders Station.

City Experience Day 2 Summary

I woke up and once again had breakfast i had 3 bits of toast then i went and caught the bus to Croydon Station. I waited around for my mates and then we went to IGA again to get a drink. When we got back we got out names ticked off then we went on the train to Flinders Station.

Our first big group activity was going to Federation Square and going to the Ian Potter Gallery which was pretty boring and crap. That crappy tour went for 1 hour i think then we had to go to a stupid vegetarian place for lunch and the served us some vegetarian Currie which was alright i guess but made me get stomach cramps after woulds.

We then went off in our small groups and we went to the State Theatre and Some other Gallery and they were all crap because its nothing I’m interested in so yer that pretty much summed up my day. 

City Experience Day 1 Summary

Well to start the day off i woke up and got breaky and started walking to the station at 8:00, when i got there i went to get my ticket and then we walked to IGA to get a drink and it was pretty bloody cold. We all got our names ticked off and went and got on the train, that's was about 9:02. The train ride was boring as anything but thank god i had my MP3 player. We had to get off at Richmond station because we had the tour of the M.C.G.

When we got there we walked around it like once then we had to go back and go to the bottom and enter there so it took us about 20 bloody minutes to find where we were suppose to go. We entered the M.C.G and then we split up into 2 groups, our tour guides name was Malcolm and he is a volunteer there and he has been a M.C.C member for 38 years. We got to go into the Richmond change rooms and look around then we went out onto the ground which sent a chill up my spine because i hope to play cricket on that ground one day, i took some grass lol and put it in my pocket. We went to the members area and had a look around at the special seating they get which is awesome and i hope one day i can become a member myself. The tour went for about 1 hour and a half and then we had to go.

We got on a tram and went of to SouthBank and had lunch which was really expensive so i didnt bother to get anything. I just had a sandwhich and a drink and some of my mates chips which they bought.

We went off to the Rialto tower which was awsome you could see everything from up there. Then we went to the G.P.O which was boring then we went to the QV centre and then we had to walk back to Flinders station to catch the train back to Croydon.