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BAD DVD

October 31, 2006
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Story Reveiew “WISEMAN”

September 7, 2006

I think my story went well, i enjoyed writting it, its a bit grosome but thats me and this story is really funny in some parts. I hope the teacher like sit even no its not my good copy.

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Amsterdam Sea Port

July 20, 2006

The old crooked man stood on the docks of a redeveloping Port Amsterdam. The old man couldn’t see his reflection in the water because of how extremely dirty the water was and the ripples making the water look more dirty than what it is normally. And to think they can change this place and make the water cleaner and deeper.

He stands there in the pouring rain and lighting and thunder in the distance, it finishes a perfect scene for a terrific painting. He wears his rain coat and rain hat with water splashing off them and onto the already drenched pier. You can see his perky nipples through his rain coat, his nose is blue like it caught some frostbite and his eyes nearly iced shut.

 The old crooked man stood by the Pier waiting for his boat to come back from its sea voyage which he couldn’t go on due to an illness that wont let him sail again. He see’s his boat in the distance and right at that moment he grabs his chest and falls into the extremely un clean murky water, his body just there floatingon the top of the water with rain drops splashing around the poor old crooked deadman.

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Synopsis: The WiseMan

July 20, 2006

Potman is a vengeful kid and he wants revenge against everyone that made his life hard when he started his teenage years and he starts by killing his father. Potman has a long path of people he needs to get revenge on and he goes through them one by one brutally killing them until he gets to the people he wants the most revenge on “THE FOUR BLACK GUYS” the reason his so scared of these black guys is because when he was thirteen he had sex with this black chick Molina that at the time was going out with one of those black guys named Jamal but Molina didn’t say that to Potman so when the Jamal found out he got his black mates to bash up Potman with him, they broke both of Potmans legs and smashed in his face with a baseball bat. So when Potman gets to the last four people he really wants revenge he is scared but he knows whats to do. Potman approaches the black guys with a large Machete, the black guys stand there and laugh at Potman, Jamal runs off but Potman doesn’t take any notice of it, the black guys pull out brass knuckles and runs at Potman……………………………………….

Sorry but u will just have to read my story to find the ending out:P  

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Synopsis: The WiseMan

July 20, 2006

Potman is a vengful kid and he wants revenge against everyone that made his life hard when he started his teenage years and he starts by killing his father. Potman has a long path of people he needs to get revenge on and he goes through them one by one brutally kiling them untill he gets to the people he wants the most revenge on “THE FOUR BLACK GUYS” the reason his so scared of these black guys is because when he was thirteen he had sex with this black chick Molina that at the time was going out with one of those black guys named Jamal but Molina didnt say that to Potman so when the Jamal found out he got his black mates to bash up Potman with him, they broke both of Potmans legs and smashed in his face with a baseball bat. So when Potman gets to the last four people he really wants revenge he is scared but he knows wats to do. Potman approaches the black guys with a large Mechette, the black guys stand there and laugh at Potman, Jamal runs off but Potman doesnt take any notice of it, the black guys pull out brass knuckles and runs at potman……………………………………….

Sorry but u will just have to read my story to find the ending out:P  

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Novel

July 7, 2006

Title: The Wiseman

Main Character: Potman Genre

Short Description: He is a smartass. He does whatever he wants when he wants. He is 14 years old and he enjoys sports and he is very fit.

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Spelling Test

July 6, 2006

Facist      Fascist            I got that stupid word wrong so i got 9 out of 10