Comments for ThE fIfStEr Is GoOd ThE fIfStEr Is BaD iF u MaKe Me MaD IlL mAkE u SaD!!!!!

Comment on BAD DVD by schnookiputtzi

schnookiputtzi — Wed, 15 Nov 2006 22:42:44 +0000

what the????????!!!!!!!!!

Comment on Story Reveiew “WISEMAN” by schnookiputtzi

schnookiputtzi — Wed, 15 Nov 2006 22:42:13 +0000

oh dear….. shame they don’t………. keep smilin!!!

Comment on Synopsis: The WiseMan by schnookiputtzi

schnookiputtzi — Thu, 20 Jul 2006 23:36:26 +0000

Ok. Nasty!!!! I’m looking forward to reading it even though i will probably hav nightmares for like a week. It sounds like it will have plenty of suspense action and gore. All the makings opf a disturbing but awesome story! Coool Look forward to it! P.S Can i still edit ur story? Keep up the good work.

Comment on Novel by schnookiputtzi

schnookiputtzi — Thu, 20 Jul 2006 23:13:08 +0000

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Comment on Novel by mrbartlett

mrbartlett — Thu, 20 Jul 2006 00:52:58 +0000

Could do with a few more details, but this is a good start. Good title too.

Comment on Rehab Challenge by mrbartlett

mrbartlett — Mon, 08 May 2006 01:04:31 +0000

Good work M! An excellent example of a challenge you’ve had to face and the strategies you used to do so. Try writing in shorter sentences though as it makes your writing easier to read. It’s also worth running a spellcheck as there’s a couple of typos it would have picked up for you.

Comment on Questions Of Stereotype For Bend It Like Beckham by mrbartlett

mrbartlett — Mon, 08 May 2006 01:01:28 +0000

I think there are some good ideas in here M but think you could have worked a little harder on expanding them. It’s important to remember that stereotypes aren’t necessarily good things, in fact we need to work hard not to think of people as being stereotypes. The girl you played football with, for example, was breaking the stereotype of ‘a girl’. Because you had expectations of a girl behaving in a certain way (ie. according to the stereotype of ‘a girl’), you then weren’t sure what to do with her when she behaved in a different way.