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Synopsis: The WiseMan

July 20, 2006

Potman is a vengeful kid and he wants revenge against everyone that made his life hard when he started his teenage years and he starts by killing his father. Potman has a long path of people he needs to get revenge on and he goes through them one by one brutally killing them until he gets to the people he wants the most revenge on “THE FOUR BLACK GUYS” the reason his so scared of these black guys is because when he was thirteen he had sex with this black chick Molina that at the time was going out with one of those black guys named Jamal but Molina didn’t say that to Potman so when the Jamal found out he got his black mates to bash up Potman with him, they broke both of Potmans legs and smashed in his face with a baseball bat. So when Potman gets to the last four people he really wants revenge he is scared but he knows whats to do. Potman approaches the black guys with a large Machete, the black guys stand there and laugh at Potman, Jamal runs off but Potman doesn’t take any notice of it, the black guys pull out brass knuckles and runs at Potman……………………………………….

Sorry but u will just have to read my story to find the ending out:P  

One comment

  1. Ok. Nasty!!!! I’m looking forward to reading it even though i will probably hav nightmares for like a week. It sounds like it will have plenty of suspense action and gore. All the makings opf a disturbing but awesome story! Coool Look forward to it! P.S Can i still edit ur story? :-) Keep up the good work.



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